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First puff, life is rough,
jesus saves, beneath the waves,
car crashes, drug stashes,
counting stars, papers on mars,
swollen bellies, and sandwiches from the deli.
©2008 ~fancycake
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Another one..
This was originally two poems, the first two their own, with another on the end. But I forgot it and am very sad. So I combined what I remembered with another poem, the last three lines of this one.
I guess it worked out.
Written on the drive home, into my cell phone.
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~dragondreamzero:icondragondreamzero: Apr 19, 2008, 10:40:56 AM
another nicely done poem.

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~fancycake:iconfancycake: Apr 19, 2008, 1:25:57 PM
Thank you!

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